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Would you guys please look at my new privacy policy pages and my terms of service page. I got them both from www.freeprivacypolicy.com and I’m not really sure of some of the parts to them. I don’t think all that stuff is really needed for a blog. I don’t know enough about it to say for sure though. Anyone know a lawyer? lol

In any case could you look at it and tell me what you think? Let me know if you see any typos or anything obviously wrong. And which parts if any you think I should delete. Thank you!

2 comments

  1. Hi Elle,

    There are a few typos and a few things which could be reworded on the Privacy Policy page:

    For example there is an opening parenthesis "(Cookies are small files…." but no closing parenthesis.

    The second sentence has a capital "E" for enter.

    I would say "When you participate in a giveaway you will be asked to provide your email address. If you are selected as the winner, you will be asked to provide your…" and "You may also visit our site anonymously."

    Less awkward.

    There are semi colons used instead of bullets for "to administer a contest & to send periodic emails."

    Just a few things to consider…

  2. @Our Mom Spot

    Hi, Thank you very much! I fixed those things. I don't know why I didn't see some of those myself but I didn't. I appreciate your help. If you see anything else that could be better please let me know. Not just on those pages either. Anywhere on my blog. I'm open to suggestions. I might not follow them but I'll definitely consider them! Thanks again, Elle

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